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Arthur and the inviserbles - personal responce
The genre of this book is fanaticy and adventure because he goes to a new world and triex to figger out what is happening there. Arthur is living with his grandfather until he discovers something that his grandfather never told him. He finds a key that leads to a portal that takes Arthur into a new world. Arthor makes new friends that ask him to help them defeat the dark lord and take back their land. He tries to help them as he is trying to make it back to his own world. I would ike to rate this book a 10 out of 10 because it is a really good adventure book and if you close your eyes you can see your sefl in that world.
KKN - House on auction for $1.00
Retired couple, Michael and Phyllis Thoms have put their house on auction for $1.00 because it is in the Christ Church red zone. Since the quakes, the couple have lost $400,000 on the house and now just want out. It has 3 bedrooms and everything else you need in a house to survive. All the couple wants is to get enough money to get to the UK. Click here for more info on it?
Lone Robot description
WALT: Show not Tell , Describe the scene “CRUNCH, CRUNCH” I was on my own in the deep dark forest with the leaves falling heavily on my head . My heart sank to the bottom of my body. I heard a big BANG and then a black cloud came from the bush like it was a boobie trap . I ran like a lion was chasing me to see what it was. It was something big, grey and rusty with a marking that I had on my body.
Hanging Bed description
WALT: Show not tell WALT: Use more descriptive language I was walking in the forest and my eyes opened wide. Something was in the trees . It started to sway side to side, back and forward over and over again . It looked so comfortable. I didn’t stop staring at it until I saw a ladder that looked like it lead up to it. I climbed up it and there were Pillows on it with thick black blankets . There was a big furry thing on it and it had its hands out like it wanted to cuddle me.
Girl on a string Description
WALT: Show not Tell WALT: Describe the Scene Everyone was having a good time until the sky went black then the sun went black. It made everybody run around like a headless chickens madly. There was something dangling off it. It was green and had things falling out of it everywhere. People started to wonder what that was and who that was?