Marshmallows bare bones

By Anonymous -
WALT: Create a bare bones plan

  • Boy cooks marshmallows
  • Something creeps up behind him
  • Boy gets scared
  • Something jumps
  • Boy looks at stick and no marshmallows
  • Something goes to bush
  • Boy cooks more marshmallows
  • Boy hears a scream and looks away
  • The stick was gone
  • Boy gets angry gets another stick
  • There are 10 marshmallows on
  • Something comes from bush
  • Boy picks up the stick and runs
  • The thing chases him
  • Boy runs back to the fire
  • The things face gets shone by the light
  • IT IS A VELOCIRAPTOR

Comments

  1. Unknown27 August 2014 at 10:39

    hi byron
    cool bare bone i liked it, it was funny
    seeya

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  2. Unknown28 August 2014 at 09:19

    Hi Byron,
    Cool bare bone story.
    How did you think it up?
    It is weird how their is a velociraptor (rapid robber)
    They are epic because they are the second smartest dinosaur.
    The smarted were troodon (wounding tooth)
    Troodon could eat meat and vegetables and scientists think that it was the last dinosaur to die out (65 million years ago(MYA))
    What is your favorite dinosaur?
    My favorite dinosaur is velociraptor.

    From Jimmy

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