Lone Robot description
WALT: Show not Tell, Describe the scene
“CRUNCH, CRUNCH” I was on my own in the deep dark forest with the leaves falling heavily on my head. My heart sank to the bottom of my body. I heard a big BANG and then a black cloud came from the bush like it was a boobie trap. I ran like a lion was chasing me to see what it was. It was something big, grey and rusty with a marking that I had on my body.
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