THE SWING

By Anonymous -
THE SWING
WALT: Use proper tense in my story
WALT: Use 2 - 3 Paragraphs
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There in the distance where nobody has been for years was a little girl by herself. There was no grass where she was and it sounded like she wasn’t have that much fun. I went over to her to see what was the matter.

“What is wrong little girl?” I whispered
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She didn’t hear me so I carried on. As I got closer I could see the she was as white as the fresh snow. I could hear a song that reminded me of my mother. I was scared but I still carried on walking towards her. I checked behind me to see if there was anymore figures and when I paired back she was gone.
“Where are you little girl, you were just there on the swing and now you have disappeared?” I yelled
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I looked around to see if she was anywhere to be seen but all I could see was heavy fog and tree figures. The trees looked like they were coming closer every time I looked away from them. I looked at the swing once more and then Something grabbed me by my shoulders and dragged me away from the swing.

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